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sp115


Nov 24, 2011, 7:34 PM

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Re: [norfolk] Feedback on my new website
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Nice images and layout, but you need a serious rewrite of your bio. There are ways to infuse it with your personal vibe, but as it stands it's awkward, amateurish and filled with grammatical errors. No offense intended, you seem like you can deliver the results, just have a professional work with you on on the written content.

Btw, it loads quick and looks nice on an iPhone...


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