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Paul_Y

Feb 18, 2008, 5:14 PM
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Emilie on the campus board.
Incorporating your critiques from my earlier Campus Boarding post to a new photo.
Wider crop, more balanced lighting, motion blur, and a dash of thong just for some interest Smile

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Critiques welcome. Thanks in advance.

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melekzek

Feb 19, 2008, 9:17 AM
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I think this is a better framing than your previous take, but.... motion blur good, handshake blur bad Tongue

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Paul_Y

Feb 19, 2008, 4:13 PM
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Melezek,
Thank you for your comments. I redid the photo and removed hand blur and left a tad motion blur, and reposted it.

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krillen

Feb 21, 2008, 3:04 PM
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I think you still need to freeze her head or at least her eyes. Right now everything is shakey.

uptick

Feb 21, 2008, 3:55 PM
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Nice that her thong matches her shirt... Tongue

Sorry. Couldnt resist. Blush

Paul_Y

Feb 21, 2008, 4:53 PM
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Nice that her thong matches her shirt...

Yes, sometimes you get lucky in unexpected ways. By the way, I did clear this picture with Emilie before posting.

The motion blur issue brings up an interesting point. When trying to create it when you had none I guess you have to decide what parts of the body would really have been moving. I picked a virtual shutter speed of around 1/60 with flash and low ambient light. That determined the extent of the imaginary motion blur.

This time I decided that since she is close to the apex of the dyno, just her left hand and feet would be moving.

I think this does improve it!
Click on the image to see it at 800 pixels.
Thanks,
Paul

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uptick

Feb 21, 2008, 5:07 PM
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I like the lighting. May have been better to get more of her face. Expressions tell the story.

Like this one better than the last boarding post.

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