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norfolk
Nov 25, 2011, 12:46 AM
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Just launched a new website I put together with a good friend of mine. Our toughts was to keep it simple to let the images and movies speak as much as possible. What do you think about it. I'm eager to hear, bad and good.
http://www.maphoto.se
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sp115
Nov 25, 2011, 3:34 AM
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Nice images and layout, but you need a serious rewrite of your bio. There are ways to infuse it with your personal vibe, but as it stands it's awkward, amateurish and filled with grammatical errors. No offense intended, you seem like you can deliver the results, just have a professional work with you on on the written content.
Btw, it loads quick and looks nice on an iPhone...
(This post was edited by sp115 on Nov 25, 2011, 3:36 AM)
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gblauer
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Nov 25, 2011, 4:41 AM
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Ditto on the Bio. Needs a re-write...
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norfolk
Nov 25, 2011, 12:05 PM
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Thank you guys. I will try to rewrite it in a better way. I'm not that good at english, so I will se if I can find someone to help me with it. Appreciate your feedback about that.
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abrock5
Nov 25, 2011, 1:40 PM
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Same as the others...just get that bio re-written. On the other hand, absolutely fantastic work! I really enjoy your photography style, and the video is great as well. Work with the wording on your website a little bit, but the content is solid!
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dreday3000
Nov 25, 2011, 4:18 PM
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Nice work. Great photos!
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norfolk
Nov 26, 2011, 3:09 PM
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Thanks for the feedback.
I asked I friend of mine to ahve a look at the text, so soon it will be re-written.
Any other feedback on the site in general?
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grayhghost
Nov 26, 2011, 5:34 PM
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I would order your climbing photos from strongest to weakest from the top of the page to the bottom. A lot of people will only look at a few near the top and you want them to be "wowed." Make the strongest ones bigger and the weaker ones smaller, filling in the gaps. The sunset silhouette steep climber should be big because it's great, and the flat light sport climbers should be small because they don't pop like sunset colors. Nice work, looks good on an iPad.
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