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andrasostrom
Jun 28, 2012, 8:51 PM
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Hey guys,
I'm new to the forum but I thought I'd share this short film I wrote and directed about rock climbing. I wrote it to convey the goodness of traveling to natural places and used the aesthetic qualities of climbing to enhance the film.
I just entered it into a short film contest and it needs votes to get to the next round, so if you could take a look at it and vote, it would be greatly appreciated and the potential winnings would be used to support climbers!
Here's the link: http://www.facebook.com/...=app_130386650433349
The title of the film is "Climber"
Thanks!
-Andras
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Gmburns2000
Jun 29, 2012, 5:30 AM
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andrasostrom wrote: Hey guys, I'm new to the forum but I thought I'd share this short film I wrote and directed about rock climbing. I wrote it to convey the goodness of traveling to natural places and used the aesthetic qualities of climbing to enhance the film. I just entered it into a short film contest and it needs votes to get to the next round, so if you could take a look at it and vote, it would be greatly appreciated and the potential winnings would be used to support climbers! Here's the link: http://www.facebook.com/...=app_130386650433349 The title of the film is "Climber" Thanks! -Andras
anyway of getting to the contest / film without having to add the facebook app?
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andrasostrom
Jun 29, 2012, 8:23 AM
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unfortunately I think you need to have facebook to be able to vote..
However, here's a direct link if you'd like to see it: https://vimeo.com/44617927
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Gmburns2000
Jun 29, 2012, 8:50 AM
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andrasostrom wrote: unfortunately I think you need to have facebook to be able to vote.. However, here's a direct link if you'd like to see it: https://vimeo.com/44617927
Nice little video. Thanks for sharing.
A little feedback (if you care): not sure if the climber really is "first timer" (not sure that it matters for the audience), the camera movement at times made me a bit sick, and not sure if a guy sitting on the beach writing "find yours" is well linked to climbing.
But good luck. I enjoyed it.
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andrasostrom
Jun 29, 2012, 9:53 PM
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thanks for the feedback!
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mitchy
Jun 30, 2012, 1:38 PM
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it was a little broke back mountain for me, with the high five and fist thing and your buddy forgot his bra.
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dan2see
Jun 30, 2012, 2:27 PM
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Hey yourself. Straw is cheaper. Grass if free.
Your filming was OK.
But the title is misleading. You could name it "Life's a Beach", or "Buddies in Fresh Air", or "Shaving is for Working Dudes".
Frankly I think the climbing aspect -- the technical stuff about ropes -- could be omitted. Then the unity for the rest of the scenes would be stronger, and maybe your message would be clearer.
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andrasostrom
Jun 30, 2012, 2:36 PM
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haha, those are great titles! i wish i had thought of them
thanks for the feedback!
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