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Jan 13, 2005, 12:59 AM
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First photo for critique...
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This image is from my recent (Christmas holiday) trip to New Zealand. It's a digital panorama stitched together from 6 individual shots, taken on the way up our first real peak (ever!), Mt Jervois.

http://www.rockclimbing.com/...p.cgi?Detailed=46353

There's a small overlap artifact in the bottom left, which I'll fix up when I have a little more time.

Any comments would be great.

Thanks,

Tristan


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Jan 13, 2005, 10:13 AM
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Nice shot, you know much more about photo shop than I do. I wonder if cropping the sun side out would make the shot more interesting.

Since it has already been digitally enhanced, you may want to change the color of the climbers parka to make him more noticeable too.

Nice job overall.


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to centered imho. i even have not noticed the climber in the first glance. Although it is nice to see both sides, I would prefer one side larger, placing the peak and the climber in focus.
A couple of steps higher, the talent would be in sunlight, making him easier to spot too...
very nice colors......err.... i mean blue....


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to centered imho. i even have not noticed the climber in the first glance. Although it is nice to see both sides, I would prefer one side larger, placing the peak and the climber in focus.
A couple of steps higher, the talent would be in sunlight, making him easier to spot too...
very nice colors.

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