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melodicllama
Jan 15, 2005, 11:53 PM
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In reply to: I guess no one knows The pattern is five, seven, five Not anything else For syllables per line, I mean. hypocritical? that was 5,8,5 for sure unless i cant count...
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napoleon_in_rags
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Hands with nasty scabs Big F**kin Bleedin Flappers Thanks Joshua Tree
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costellobr
Jan 16, 2005, 1:47 AM
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Lust in a cheap motel climbed that today in lovely NC weather
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unabonger
Jan 16, 2005, 2:23 AM
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In reply to: I guess no one knows The pattern is five, seven, five Not anything else Arguably correct Other formats are accepted Certainty makes fools.
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newbierockstar
Jan 16, 2005, 3:31 AM
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The page cannot be found So sayeth the big blue E Become a supporting partner Twenty bones will be the fee (OK, OK, I know it's not haiku per se, but UB said all formats were accepted!!)
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newbierockstar
Jan 16, 2005, 4:00 AM
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So Ron Jeremy Who says Marge would even want Your hairy fat a$$?
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newbierockstar
Jan 16, 2005, 5:14 AM
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Love among the rocks He's her prince of trad and sport Distance is a bitch
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dlintz
Jan 16, 2005, 5:26 AM
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my name is germ free... thrutch clutch over the lip dirtnap by the creek d.
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tattooed_climber
Jan 16, 2005, 5:34 AM
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i dream of the crags with rack and rope; an hour drive squamish here i come
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pancaketom
Jan 16, 2005, 5:35 AM
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my hands get so black when belaying with my rope time to wash it off yellow alien you fit where nothing else will you are my saviour
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kachoong
Jan 16, 2005, 5:38 AM
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stumble from the dunny what? can't be all that funny they point and laugh. what?
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pancaketom
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padding on a slab that bolt must be here somewhere runouts frighten me Tom turns out haiku so fast it makes your head spin around like a top
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dlintz
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silent but the wind sorting thoughts revelation should've tied some knots d.
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newbierockstar
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Four hundred posts now Adrenaline junkie no more That much closer to pathetic
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dlintz
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In reply to: Four hundred posts now Adrenaline junkie no more That much closer to pathetic post willy nilly poo filled trophies are given newbie's no newbie :wink: d.
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rivercityrni
Jan 16, 2005, 4:14 PM
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In reply to: In reply to: I guess no one knows The pattern is five, seven, five Not anything else For syllables per line, I mean. hypocritical? that was 5,8,5 for sure unless i cant count... Hypocritical? Yes, very. You got me there! I am humbled, thanks.
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napoleon_in_rags
Jan 16, 2005, 6:07 PM
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Epic Haiku Fall Killed Partner Stranded at Camp4. At Least We have meat tonight!
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kachoong
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climb, not an option the rain, it falls endlessly internet, save us! chalk up and ready focus, launch, slice through the air I stick it.... I awaken :(
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wingnut
Jan 17, 2005, 1:42 PM
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I stick the tiny edge. Almost. finger sketches, whole Hand slips, falling aaaaahhhhhhh!
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bonin_in_the_boneyard
Jan 17, 2005, 3:49 PM
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In reply to: Epic Haiku Fall Killed Partner Stranded at Camp4. At Least We have meat tonight! Dude, that is fucked up He uses the royal 'we' Hannibal Lechter
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napoleon_in_rags
Jan 18, 2005, 12:47 AM
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In reply to: In reply to: Epic Haiku Fall Killed Partner Stranded at Camp4. At Least We have meat tonight! Dude, that is f--- up He uses the royal 'we' Hannibal Lechter Me Myself and I Ate Liver with Fava Beans And Nice Chianti.
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amber
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In reply to: I guess no one knows The pattern is five, seven, five Not anything else horrible haiku - count your syllables before chastising others. edited to add: someone else called it. guess i should read the whole thread before responding.
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unabonger
Jan 18, 2005, 3:47 AM
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In reply to: In reply to: I guess no one knows The pattern is five, seven, five Not anything else horrible haiku - count your syllables before chastising others. edited to add: someone else called it. guess i should read the whole thread before responding. I'd also like to point out that 5-7-5 is not the only acceptable format for haiku's. The form of poetry is from the Japanes culture, and there has been debate regarding the number of syllables to translate the form. Also, a haiku should ideally arouse a distinct emotion, and offer a somewhat spiritual insight or image, (often involving the natural world) as opposed to a narrative of events. --- Suffer your haikus mangled jangling in my head mine are even worse
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unabonger
Jan 18, 2005, 3:51 AM
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In reply to: In reply to: I guess no one knows The pattern is five, seven, five Not anything else horrible haiku - count your syllables before chastising others. edited to add: someone else called it. guess i should read the whole thread before responding. I'd also like to point out that 5-7-5 is not the only acceptable format for haiku's. The form of poetry is from the Japanes culture, and there has been debate regarding the number of syllables to translate the form. Also, a haiku should ideally arouse a distinct emotion, and offer a somewhat spiritual insight or image, (often involving the natural world) as opposed to a narrative of events. --- Suffer your haikus mangled jangling in my head mine are even worse
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