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melodicllama
Jan 15, 2005, 11:53 PM
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In reply to: I guess no one knows The pattern is five, seven, five Not anything else For syllables per line, I mean.
hypocritical?
that was 5,8,5 for sure
unless i cant count...
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napoleon_in_rags
Jan 16, 2005, 12:13 AM
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Hands with nasty scabs
Big F**kin Bleedin Flappers
Thanks Joshua Tree
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costellobr
Jan 16, 2005, 1:47 AM
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Lust in a cheap motel
climbed that today
in lovely NC weather
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unabonger
Jan 16, 2005, 2:23 AM
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In reply to: I guess no one knows The pattern is five, seven, five Not anything else
Arguably correct
Other formats are accepted
Certainty makes fools.
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newbierockstar
Jan 16, 2005, 3:31 AM
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The page cannot be found
So sayeth the big blue E
Become a supporting partner
Twenty bones will be the fee
(OK, OK, I know it's not haiku per se, but UB said all formats were accepted!!)
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newbierockstar
Jan 16, 2005, 4:00 AM
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So Ron Jeremy
Who says Marge would even want
Your hairy fat a$$?
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newbierockstar
Jan 16, 2005, 5:14 AM
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Love among the rocks
He's her prince of trad and sport
Distance is a bitch
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dlintz
Jan 16, 2005, 5:26 AM
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my name is germ free...
thrutch clutch over the lip
dirtnap by the creek
d.
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tattooed_climber
Jan 16, 2005, 5:34 AM
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i dream of the crags
with rack and rope; an hour drive
squamish here i come
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pancaketom
Jan 16, 2005, 5:35 AM
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my hands get so black
when belaying with my rope
time to wash it off
yellow alien
you fit where nothing else will
you are my saviour
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kachoong
Jan 16, 2005, 5:38 AM
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stumble from the dunny
what? can't be all that funny
they point and laugh. what?
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pancaketom
Jan 16, 2005, 5:38 AM
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padding on a slab
that bolt must be here somewhere
runouts frighten me
Tom turns out haiku
so fast it makes your head spin
around like a top
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dlintz
Jan 16, 2005, 5:51 AM
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silent but the wind
sorting thoughts revelation
should've tied some knots
d.
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newbierockstar
Jan 16, 2005, 6:02 AM
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Four hundred posts now
Adrenaline junkie no more
That much closer to pathetic
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dlintz
Jan 16, 2005, 6:59 AM
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In reply to: Four hundred posts now Adrenaline junkie no more That much closer to pathetic
post willy nilly
poo filled trophies are given
newbie's no newbie
:wink:
d.
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rivercityrni
Jan 16, 2005, 4:14 PM
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In reply to: In reply to: I guess no one knows The pattern is five, seven, five Not anything else For syllables per line, I mean. hypocritical? that was 5,8,5 for sure unless i cant count...
Hypocritical?
Yes, very. You got me there!
I am humbled, thanks.
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napoleon_in_rags
Jan 16, 2005, 6:07 PM
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Epic Haiku
Fall Killed Partner
Stranded at Camp4. At Least
We have meat tonight!
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kachoong
Jan 16, 2005, 10:55 PM
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climb, not an option
the rain, it falls endlessly
internet, save us!
chalk up and ready
focus, launch, slice through the air
I stick it.... I awaken :(
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wingnut
Jan 17, 2005, 1:42 PM
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I stick the tiny edge.
Almost. finger sketches, whole
Hand slips, falling aaaaahhhhhhh!
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bonin_in_the_boneyard
Jan 17, 2005, 3:49 PM
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In reply to: Epic Haiku Fall Killed Partner Stranded at Camp4. At Least We have meat tonight!
Dude, that is fucked up
He uses the royal 'we'
Hannibal Lechter
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napoleon_in_rags
Jan 18, 2005, 12:47 AM
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In reply to: In reply to: Epic Haiku Fall Killed Partner Stranded at Camp4. At Least We have meat tonight! Dude, that is f--- up He uses the royal 'we' Hannibal Lechter
Me Myself and I
Ate Liver with Fava Beans
And Nice Chianti.
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amber
Jan 18, 2005, 1:05 AM
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In reply to: I guess no one knows The pattern is five, seven, five Not anything else
horrible haiku -
count your syllables before
chastising others.
edited to add:
someone else called it.
guess i should read the whole thread
before responding.
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unabonger
Jan 18, 2005, 3:47 AM
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In reply to: In reply to: I guess no one knows The pattern is five, seven, five Not anything else horrible haiku - count your syllables before chastising others. edited to add: someone else called it. guess i should read the whole thread before responding.
I'd also like to point out that 5-7-5 is not the only acceptable format for haiku's. The form of poetry is from the Japanes culture, and there has been debate regarding the number of syllables to translate the form.
Also, a haiku should ideally arouse a distinct emotion, and offer a somewhat spiritual insight or image, (often involving the natural world) as opposed to a narrative of events.
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Suffer your haikus
mangled jangling in my head
mine are even worse
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unabonger
Jan 18, 2005, 3:51 AM
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In reply to: In reply to: I guess no one knows The pattern is five, seven, five Not anything else horrible haiku - count your syllables before chastising others. edited to add: someone else called it. guess i should read the whole thread before responding.
I'd also like to point out that 5-7-5 is not the only acceptable format for haiku's. The form of poetry is from the Japanes culture, and there has been debate regarding the number of syllables to translate the form.
Also, a haiku should ideally arouse a distinct emotion, and offer a somewhat spiritual insight or image, (often involving the natural world) as opposed to a narrative of events.
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Suffer your haikus
mangled jangling in my head
mine are even worse
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